Congratulations on putting together a progressive RTI Bill for the Federal level in Pakistan. We have examined the Bill in light of the decade-long implementation experience in India as well as knowledge of the content and the implementation of such laws in other Commonwealth and non-Commonwealth jurisdictions. 60+ comments and observations for further improvement in the Bill are keyed in as recommendations for your ready reference. If you would like CHRI to send a formal submission on the Bill, do let us know the deadline for so doing. Please feel free to circulate this email and attachments to any person who may be interested.